More poems from an earlier incarnation

[David W. Berner]

Beautiful, Ian. Particularly love The Permanence of Shrapnel. Could it be about Dylan Thomas? Forgive me for openly trying to interrupt, but it struck me as such.

[Ian Gouge]

Thanks David. The poem wasn't about anyone in particular, simply inspired by a photograph I saw.

[David W. Berner]

Ah, the “estuary” triggered it, as the estuary outside his boathouse in Laugharne.

[Jim Friedman]

I like Ripples very much, especially the detail of events. The poem is both celebratory and poignant, nicely poised between the two.

[Ian Gouge]

Thanks Jim.