A 'mirror' poem.
Glad to be of help - simplicity is a double-edged sword. Too little of it and obscurity tumbles in, too much and the energy of poetry drains away to greetings card nothing.
Bravo!
10 lines begin with the word “the” which is over plain and impoverished in terms of selection. Enriched or layered this is not.
It is simple, yes. Thanks for the comment.
Lovely. Simple and effective.
Beautiful
Glad to be of help - simplicity is a double-edged sword. Too little of it and obscurity tumbles in, too much and the energy of poetry drains away to greetings card nothing.
Bravo!
10 lines begin with the word “the” which is over plain and impoverished in terms of selection. Enriched or layered this is not.
It is simple, yes. Thanks for the comment.
Lovely. Simple and effective.
Beautiful