Writing until the light goes out

Writing until the light goes out

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Writing until the light goes out
Writing until the light goes out
Sonnets 46 - 50
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Sonnets 46 - 50

Dec 18, 2023
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Writing until the light goes out
Writing until the light goes out
Sonnets 46 - 50
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Battle of the Sexes

We spoke of the righteousness of war.

Neither out of mind nor out of sight

we languished at the hotel bar

each shot boosting convictions we were right

the others’ argument a blatant lie,

truth corrupted by part-occluded eyes.

How could you deny

my reasoning when yours - propaganda and lies

so coldly delivered -

ignored the primacy of the heart?

How could you be so determined

that we should part

and - in playing your part

to perfection - contrive to break my heart?

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