Writing until the light goes out

Writing until the light goes out

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Writing until the light goes out
Writing until the light goes out
Sonnets 31 - 35
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Sonnets 31 - 35

Nov 27, 2023
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Writing until the light goes out
Sonnets 31 - 35
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Heart-to-heart

Others like to boast of broken hearts

as if trophies, their own now dead

and fractured into a multiplicity of parts

cast aside and buried.

They cultivate an artificial tear

conjured from a misty eye,

the outcome - it would appear -

of the mortal wound from a fatal lie.

My stubborn heart, kept artificially alive,

still misses beats now you are gone,

its sole remaining task to give

voice to being irretrievably alone.

Yet what of this does your heart see

immunised against the plague of my agony?

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